Farewell to the king

 

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I’ve just finished Excalibur (1997), the third and final book in the Warlord Chronicles, Bernard Cornwell’s take on the King Arthur legend.  Reading it was a bittersweet experience.  On one hand, I was pleased it lived up to the high standards set by its predecessors in the trilogy, The Winter King (1995) and Enemy of God (1996).  On the other, I felt almost reluctant to read it because I’d come to know so well, even love, the characters from the earlier two books – and this being the King Arthur legend, I was aware things wouldn’t end happily for them.

 

Still, not wanting to read the final book in the trilogy because you don’t want bad things to happen to its characters – that must show how captivating Cornwell’s Warlord books are.  And besides, as they say, all good things come to an end.

 

Once again, the story is narrated by Derfel, an elderly, one-handed Christian monk. He’s writing down – with his remaining hand, obviously – the details of Arthur’s life as it unfolded in post-Roman, fifth-and-sixth-century Britain, a time when the island and its Briton inhabitants were besieged by invading, land-hungry Saxons.  Derfel knows these details because despite being Christian and monkish now, he was in his youth (and, in Excalibur, his middle age) a pagan and one of Arthur’s warlords.  He’s recording the story at the request of Queen Igraine, who’s too young to have known Arthur but is besotted with his legend.  Derfel unhappily suspects that, when he’s finished, the queen will change the unromantic bits of his saga to make it more legend-friendly.  “Tales of men fighting can get very boring after a while,” she scolds the old monk, “and a love story makes it all a lot more interesting.”

 

Excalibur joins the dots and tells us how Derfel went from being a powerful pagan warrior to being a humble Christian monk in a monastery run by the contemptible Bishop Sansum – a recurring character in the trilogy, who constantly schemed and shit-stirred against Arthur and, in his furtive, cowardly way, tried to engineer his downfall.  We also learn how Derfel lost his hand.  And, all credit to Cornwell’s ingenious storyline, he certainly doesn’t lose it in any way I’d expected.

 

And we find out the fates of the characters who were still standing at the end of the second book.  We learn what happened to the wily and enigmatic druid Merlin; to King Cuneglas of Powys whom, alone among Britain’s powerful kings, Arthur could depend upon as an ally; and to Derfel’s fellow warriors, such as the Christian Galahad, and the Numidian Sagramor, and the coarse but likable Culhwch.  Also, with an ache, Derfel recalls what became of his partner Ceinwyn.  In this final volume, she has to endure a lot.

 

Of course, we get the final chapters in the life of Arthur himself.  At one point, Derfel sums up the thanklessness of Arthur’s task: “If only Arthur had remained in power, men say, then the Saxons would still be paying us tribute and Britain would stretch from sea to sea, but when Britain did have Arthur it just grumbled about him.  When he gave folk what they wanted, they complained because it was not enough.  The Christians attacked him for favouring the pagans, the pagans attacked him for tolerating the Christians, and the Kings… were jealous of him…  Besides, Arthur did not let anyone down.  Britain let itself down.  Britain let the Saxons creep back, Britain squabbled among itself and then Britain whined that it was all Arthur’s fault.  Arthur, who had given them victory!”

 

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No wonder that in Excalibur, after Arthur manages to beat off the Saxons, he retires from his role as the Lord Protector of the kingdom of Dumnonia and becomes ‘a mere landowner living in the peaceful countryside with no worries other than the health of his livestock and the state of his crops…’  He also, amusingly, tries to learn how to be a blacksmith, but he’s not very good at it.  When Derfel sees him working on ‘a shapeless piece of iron that he claimed was a shoe-plate for one of his horses’, it’s clear the iron is a metaphor for his futile attempts to fashion a unified and harmonious Britain out of its quarrelling kingdoms.

 

At the same time, the book provides endings for the remaining villains of the trilogy.  These include Arthur’s treacherous wife Guinevere, who at the end of the Enemy of God had joined forces with the dastardly Lancelot – the young Queen Igraine was dismayed to learn from Derfel that Guinevere and Lancelot were definitely not the noble characters of legend.  There’s also Arthur’s cruel and potentially despotic nephew Mordred whom, despite everyone’s misgivings, Arthur feels honour-bound to give the throne of Dumnonia to when Mordred reaches manhood, thanks to an oath sworn to Mordred’s grandfather Uther Pendragon.  There are the Saxon kings Aelle and Cerdic, whose forces are rapidly encroaching on the Britons’ western strongholds.  And perhaps most fearsome of all, there’s the priestess Nimue, once a childhood friend of Derfel and a protegee of Merlin, who in Excalibur’s final pages has transformed into the leader of a fanatical pagan force that’s as much of a threat to the heroes as Mordred and the Saxons.

 

Like all good writers, though, Cornwell doesn’t paint his characters as being simply good or evil.  They’re often nuanced.  Indeed, in Excalibur, a few people we’d written off as bad guys – or bad girls – achieve some redemption for themselves.

 

While the cast of Excalibur is mostly familiar from the previous two books, we get a couple of new characters too.  We’re introduced to the mystical bard Taliesin, who is something of a surrogate figure for Merlin – Merlin is absent from much of the book and it’s only near the end that we discover the tragic reason why.  Taliesin professes to be merely an observer, someone who records and later tells the stories that happen to other people.  At one point he informs Derfel, “It does not matter to me, Lord, whether you live or die for I am the singer and you are my song…”  Yet he becomes proactive and saves the day on one important occasion.  A less welcome surrogate is Argante, a young pagan princess Arthur marries as a replacement for the disgraced Guinevere.  He has no interest in her but feels, lamely, that ‘a man should be married’.  Arthur’s lack of enthusiasm is soon reciprocated by the ambitious but bitter Argante, and she throws her lot in with Mordred.

 

Cornwell also drops Sir Gawain into the mix, as he did with Tristan and Isolde in Enemy of God, though Gawain’s appearance is even briefer than theirs was and it ends no more happily.  Here, poor Gawain certainly doesn’t get to meet a Green Knight and go off on a quest of his own.

 

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The plot of Enemy of God hinged around three events and, similarly, that of Excalibur can be divided into three main episodes.  Firstly, Merlin and Nimue attempt to summon back the old pagan gods and restore Britain to its former greatness.  This involves using the 13 ‘Treasures of Britain’ that they spent the previous two books retrieving – the Treasures include Arthur’s sword Excalibur – in an elaborate ceremony.  It also involves setting the summit of a hill called Mai Dun spectacularly on fire at Samain, the pagan predecessor to Halloween.  Secondly, the Britons engage in a long, desperate struggle against Aelle and Cerdic, whose allied forces have launched an assault on Dumnonia.  And lastly, there’s the final reckoning with the armies of Mordred and Nimue.  Mordred is intent on killing Arthur and his young son Gwydre, who has a claim on Dumnonia’s throne.  Nimue is intent on reclaiming Excalibur as a Treasure of Britain and making another attempt to bring back the ancient gods.

 

Enemy of God painted Christianity in a negative light – it concluded with a bloody revolt against Arthur by the Christians of Dumnonia, which Lancelot had fomented.  But in Excalibur the pagans come off badly too.  The ceremony that Merlin conducts on Mai Dun to summon the gods reveals a dark and hitherto-unseen side to his nature.  And by the book’s end, Nimue, who early in the trilogy had been portrayed as a heroine and even as a possible love-interest for Derfel, has degenerated into a crazed and bloodthirsty monster.

 

Regarding the magical powers that Merlin, Nimue, the other druids and the Saxons’ wizards claim to have, Cornwell continues the policy he established in the first two books – he keeps it ambiguous.  The people of the time certainly believe in it.  Magic is as much a part of life for them as warfare, court intrigue and the weather.  Modern-day readers are allowed to read between the lines and interpret some of that magic as fakery – its practitioners have no qualms about resorting to crafty conjuring tricks.  The rest of it can be attributed to coincidence.  However, in Excalibur, you’re forced to explain a lot of allegedly magic-inspired happenings – dream-prophecies, curses, enchantments – as coincidences.  You begin to wonder if, in the world Cornwell has created here, there might be substance in what Merlin and Nimue claim they can do.

 

Elsewhere, Cornwell’s description of fifth-and-sixth-century fighting is as gripping as ever.  It’s maybe even more gripping than in Excalibur’s two predecessors.  The central episode, wherein we get a Saxon invasion, a desperate flight and then a siege, and finally the Battle of Mynydd Baddon and its aftermath, lasts a good 140 pages and is enthralling from start to finish.  The climactic Battle of Camlann is on a much smaller scale but, because you know it’s Arthur’s last stand, it feels no less intense.

 

And despite the sadness that increasingly permeates the book, things are still leavened by humour.  Merlin, as ever, gets the wittiest lines.  Early on, he says about Arthur: “…he is a halfwit.  Think about it!  Lancelot alive, Mordred alive, Cerdic alive and Guinevere alive!  If a soul wants to live forever in this world it seems like a very good idea to become an enemy of Arthur.”

 

So, that’s Bernard Cornwell’s Warlord trilogy over for me.  At least I can console myself with the thought that there’s plenty of books by him I’ve still to read: two dozen Sharpe novels (1981-2025); the Grail Quest quartet (2000-2012), which sounds Arthurian but actually takes place during the Hundred Years’ War; 13 instalments of the Saxon Stories (2004-2020), set in ninth-and-tenth-century England; and four instalments of the Starbuck series (1993-96), set during the American Civil War.  Yes, there’s enough Cornwell goodness out there to keep me reading for a long time to come.

 

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Bernard Cornwell’s (still the) King

 

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A while ago on this blog, I enthusiastically reviewed Bernard Cornwell’s The Winter King (1995), the first volume of his Warlord Chronicles.  These books are his take on the King Arthur legend, which he tells in a manner closer to the reality of the Dark Ages than most other interpretations of the legend.  As a gift last Christmas, my partner kindly bought me the second and third volumes of the Warlord Chronicles, Enemy of God (1996) and Excalibur (1997).  Here are my thoughts on Enemy of God, which I’ve recently finished reading.

 

Enemy of God’s framing device is the same as The Winter King’s.  In the sixth century, an elderly monk called Derfel is writing down the history of King Arthur at the behest of the young Queen Igraine, who’s obsessed with the Arthurian tales she’s heard.  As a young man Derfel knew Arthur and became one of his most trusted warriors.  A theme in the books is the tension between messy reality and fanciful legend.  Derfel’s version of events frequently disappoints Igraine, accustomed to hearing much more romanticised stories about the king.  At one point she tells him, “There are scullions who know how to tell a tale better than you!”  Derfel fatalistically assumes that Igraine, later, will doctor his writings and make them more compatible with the legend.

 

The Winter King ended with Arthur triumphing at the Battle of Lugg Vale, a contest brought about by his own foolishness in backing out of an arranged marriage to Princess Ceinwyn of Powys, which massively offended her father, and wedding instead the more alluring but also more calculating Guinevere.  Enemy of God continues Arthur and Derfel’s story by detailing three more major events in their lives.

 

Firstly, Derfel takes part in Merlin’s ongoing quest to retrieve some relics that according to legend were given to the ancient Britons by the old pagan Gods, are known as the ‘Treasures of Britain’ and will, Merlin believes, restore Britain to the golden age it supposedly enjoyed before the arrivals of the Romans and, more lately, the Saxons.  Specifically, they go hunting for a magical cauldron that’s hidden on the island of Ynys Mon (today the Welsh island of Anglesey) off the coast of the kingdom of Lleyn, controlled by the vicious Irish king Diwrnach.  Secondly, Arthur marshals the warriors of most of the Briton kingdoms and sets off to dislodge the most powerful Saxon king, Aelle, from the east of the island – a campaign that eventually brings him to Saxon-controlled London.  And lastly, Arthur finds himself facing a rebellion in his home kingdom of Dummonia.  The rebels have incited the Christian community to rise against the pagan one there, with Arthur unjustly portrayed as the oppressive, Christian-hating pagan-in-chief, i.e., the ‘Enemy of God’ of the title.

 

Along the way, Derfel finds happiness with Ceinwyn, the woman Arthur spurned in the previous book, and they start a family together.  He also makes a troubling discovery about who his father is.  Arthur, meanwhile, learns some hard truths about certain people close to him whom he’s loved or, at least, been willing to give the benefit of the doubt to.  That Mordred, the boy-king of Dummonia, for whom Arthur has been acting as the kingdom’s lord-protector until the lad reaches manhood, turns out to be a wrong ’un is the least of the book’s surprises.

 

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A couple of things make Enemy of God feel different from its predecessor.  Firstly, Christianity is portrayed much more negatively here.  In The Winter King, the Christian Britons co-existed peacefully alongside the pagan ones, and the Briton kings had priests as well as druids in their entourages, ensuring them the support of both the ‘old’ and ‘new’ Gods.  This harmoniousness was embodied in the character of the affable and loyal Bishop Bedwin, but Enemy of God bumps him off early on.  Thereafter, the only sympathetic Christian character is Sir Galahad, who’s so decent and broad-minded he even lends Merlin a hand in his quest for the pagan cauldron.

 

Amusingly, Cornwell portrays the Christians’ activities, wailing in tongues, flagellating themselves and generally behaving hysterically as the year 500 AD draw nears – likely, they believe, to be the year when their Saviour returns to the earth – as immensely disturbing to the pagans.  They react to the Christians’ shenanigans with as much distaste and fear as modern bourgeoisie Christians have reacted to the many loopy religious cults that have sprung up during the 20th and 21st centuries.

 

A second difference is that we get far more of Merlin in this book.  In The Winter King, he didn’t show up until page 282, more than halfway through.  I was slightly critical of how he was deployed in the previous book’s plot.  I wrote that “…the manner in which Merlin reappears undermines the narrative, because it’s all a bit too unlikely.  A couple of times, the cunning old wizard pops up out of nowhere and saves the day.  He might as well just whip off a Mission Impossible-style rubber face-mask / disguise and go, ‘Duh-dah!’”  This didn’t sit very comfortably with the book’s attempts to treat the Arthurian legend with non-fantastical seriousness.

 

Merlin’s still something of an issue In Enemy of God, though here it’s to do with how he manages to suddenly revitalise himself.  At different points he seems to be at death’s door, or to have lapsed into senile decrepitude, but then he stages startling comebacks.  He’s like Doctor Who regenerating when his old body is about to die though, unlike the TV Time Lord, Merlin doesn’t actually transform into someone new.

 

Still, Cornwell’s Merlin is an immensely engaging character and he gets the best lines.  While telling Derfel what a lion is, and describing one he once saw in Rome, he remarks: “It was a very unimpressive threadbare sort of thing.  I suspected it was receiving the wrong diet.  Maybe they were feeding it Mithraists instead of Christians?”  When he goes on to talk about a crocodile, and Derfel inquires what that is, he explains, “A thing like Lancelot.”

 

It’s more difficult to breathe life into the character of Arthur.  There’s a danger that his very worthiness will make him seem two-dimensional and dull.  However, Cornwell mostly avoids this trap by highlighting the character-flaws that spring from this worthiness: naivete, gullibility and – paradoxically – being so in thrall to his sense of duty that he becomes villainous.  This last thing is illustrated when Cornwell weaves the tragic, chivalric romance of Tristan and Iseult into his narrative.  Here, the loving but doomed couple incur the wrath of King Mark of Kernow and Arthur feels duty-bound to side with Mark, even though Tristan has helped him in earlier campaigns.  When this ends horribly, Derfel is so disgusted with Arthur that he shuns him for a long time afterwards.

 

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It’s surprising to read a book written almost 30 years ago, and set roughly 1500 years ago, and find elements in it reminding me of 2025.  But Enemy of God does this in different ways.  Living in an era of Trumpian fake news, often transmitted by social media, I found myself smiling ruefully at Derfel’s accounts of how the weaselly Lancelot propagates a false image of himself, one brave and virtuous, by getting the bards to sing songs in praise of him around the countryside.  And after Derfel falls out with Arthur, he goes to those bards and pays for “a dozen songs about Tristan and Iseult that are sung to this day in all the feasting halls.  I made sure, too, that the songs put the blame for their deaths on Arthur.”

 

Also pushing fake news are the Christians.  At one point, a Christian magistrate called Nabur is executed for treason: “These days, of course, he is called a saint and martyr, but I only remember Nabur as a smooth, corrupt liar.”  Later, Arthur has to fight off an ambush in a squalid Christian settlement in the mountains of Powys, led by a filthy, wild-haired fanatic called Bishop Cadoc.  This also gets the Dark Ages equivalent of being reported on Elon Musk’s X: “They say that Arthur surprised Cadoc’s refuge, raped the women, killed the men and stole all Cadoc’s treasures, but I saw no rape, we killed only those who tried to kill us, and I found no treasures to steal – but even if there had been, Arthur would not have touched it…”  Obviously, “Cadoc was elevated into a living saint…”

 

It’s also interesting to view Enemy of God through the prism of 2025’s Britain, when Nigel Farage’s far-right Reform Party is rallying its supporters with chants of “We want our country back.”  Although Merlin is a very appealing character overall, it’s not difficult to see parallels between his mission to restore the old pre-Roman Britain and the nostalgic British nationalism peddled by Farage.  Ceinwyn, who’s quite enamoured with Merlin, gives a startlingly Farage-like speech at one point: “When I was a child… I heard all the tales of old Britain, how the Gods lived among us and everyone was happy.  There was no famine then, and no plagues, just us and the Gods and peace.  I want that Britain back, Derfel.”

 

On the other hand, Arthur evokes a more forward-looking – dare I say inclusive? – Britain.  Early in the book, he rejects Merlin’s vision of the island, saying: “This isn’t the old Britain…  Maybe once we were a people of one blood, but now?  The Romans brought men from every corner of the world!  Sarmatians, Libyans, Gauls, Numidians, Greeks!  Their blood is mingled with ours, just as it seethes with Roman blood and mixes now with Saxon blood.  We are what we are, Derfel, not what we once were…”  Arthur might be the greatest hero of British legend, but Farage’s Reform Party wouldn’t want to cite Cornwell’s version of him in their campaign literature.

 

In nearly every respect, Enemy of God is as good as its predecessor.   The only area where I think it pales a little in comparison to The Winter King is its ending.  Whereas the first volume ended with the bang that was the Battle of Lugg Vale, this volume is slightly anti-climactic.  Cornwell was presumably more concerned with manoeuvring his characters into position for the third and final volume than with finishing the second instalment with a bang similar to the first’s.  This is, to be fair, a problem that has beset many a middle volume in many a trilogy.  However, with everything else about Enemy of God so captivating and entertaining, I’m happy to overlook that slight shortcoming.

 

And so, in the near-future, I’ll hopefully get to grips with Excalibur

 

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